NCA Write Path 1 Boys

It felt like only yesterday when Noah and I were walking home down the stone path. We were talking about school and our mean maths teacher, Sir Cumference, who gave us so much homework we never had any time to ourselves. At one point I remember Noah wished that the school and all the homework would just vanish into thin air. He had no idea how his wish would come true.

Above us a crooked branch hung like a sword to a neck. All of a sudden the Earth shook, and shattered the ground into a million pieces. Sticks and stones flew through the air. We tried to run but the ground swallowed me up. I tried to scream for Noah but nothing came out. I felt light headed as the world spiralled away into blackness.

By the time I woke up Noah was nowhere to be seen. I thought I could hear his voice bouncing off the trees but nothing seemed certain right now.

4 thoughts on “NCA Write Path 1 Boys

  1. When the ground shook viciously, I was catapulted towards a planet! Soon, I saw that it looked a little bit like a Minecraft world. I fell head first into a large, grassy area. BOING! Landing on grass which was as bouncy as a trampoline, I felt dazed as I hit my head. I sat up, but then fell back down., because the gravity was just too strong!
    I saw a figure, which was ghostly, appearing out of the gloom. It looked like Noah, but I knew it wasn’t.
    “Why are you here?” growled the ghostly apparition.
    “I don’t know!” I stammered , feeling scared.

    Like

  2. When I opened my eyes, I saw… between the trees there was a colourful tulip. I realised it was a whole new world! I picked up the amazing, epic tulip that looked liked a cute Pudsey bear and placed it in my hair. The ground was a fluffy blanket that smelled like precious peppermints. The brown walls were made out of milk chocolate; the sky was made out of candy blue pearls with white icing stuck onto them!

    A door appeared! When I opened the door there were lots of servants, they looked like yellow gummy bears. Then I realised it was actually hundreds of Pudsey bears! I screeched, ‘Why are you all around me!” as they scurried towards me.

    ‘We want a new Queen!’ chanted the Pudsey bears.

    As they chanted, I looked up and saw an empty gold frame next to a painting of an elegant, stern queen.

    Like

  3. I ran along with a ginormous stone with a polka dot pattern on which the bears gave me .a vast monster with kangaroo legs, antlers of an elk ,wool of a ram and sickle-shaped teeth the size of steak knives appeared. It turned its head revealing a face like my headmistress and let out a shriek like a howler monkey combined with a banshee with a foghorn. At that moment, the stone cracked. It was an egg! A puff of orange smoke, a colossal Pudsey bear emerged, holding a machine gun. The Pudsey growled then switched the lever on and the headmistress monster howled and fell down with such force it knocked me to the floor and the monster turned to blueberry-coloured smoke. Noah was there! Then, the world shimmered and Noah, I and the Pudsey beast were on a huge lily pad. In an eruption of water, a frog-beast leapt out of the water. The face of sir conference opened the vast mouth and a never-ending tongue sped out. Me, Noah and Pudsey stuck and we zoomed to the vast mouth…

    Like

  4. We screamed as we fell into the great mouth, we started to tickle the monster inside its mouth. This made the giant frog sick! We were covered in slime, carrot chunks and dead flies. Quickly we jumped up and ran away from the Frog. We hid behind a wall and just as the giant frog jumped over the wall it was hit by a car. “yes! He’s dead!” We breathed a sigh of relief. When I put my hand on my heart I felt that it was pounding.

    But we had no time to stop. We needed to get back home. I had no idea how we would do this. We needed to find a rocket to take us back to Earth. Suddenly Noah had an amazing idea: we could make one out of all the gummy bears in the cave. All we needed to do was soak them in water so that they would stick together. We ran back to the cave and gathered all of the red, yellow and blue gummy bears and told them that if they followed us they would get a big surprise! We tricked them and brought to the waterfall were they all got very wet. We were then able to stick them together and make our rocket. As we were about to take off something terrifying happened…

    Like

Leave a comment